I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Aryan, I really like how you show to the audience whats your problem are and I really like how you explain to the people how to solve the problem. This makes me think in my next blog, I will do it in google docs. Maybe next time add some videos about the problem.
I like how you made it a news article with detail maybe next time you could add a video to describe more information about the pacific problem! -Kaedun
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Hey Aryan, I really like how you show to the audience whats your problem are and I really like how you explain to the people how to solve the problem. This makes me think in my next blog, I will do it in google docs. Maybe next time add some videos about the problem.
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