I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I really like this presentation Aryan. Good work.You have really thought about empathy and shown your understanding by giving some good examples. I like that you have shown you know the difference between empathy and sympathy. I also like that you have acknowledged someone else's input into your presentation. For your next work I would like you to create a story using an animated slide.
Wow Aryan this is fantastic work! I love your explantation of empathy it is clear to understand. Is there anyway you could slow the slide show down a bit - I couldn't read it all before it flipped.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
I really like this presentation Aryan. Good work.You have really thought about empathy and shown your understanding by giving some good examples. I like that you have shown you know the difference between empathy and sympathy. I also like that you have acknowledged someone else's input into your presentation. For your next work I would like you to create a story using an animated slide.
ReplyDeleteWow Aryan this is fantastic work! I love your explantation of empathy it is clear to understand. Is there anyway you could slow the slide show down a bit - I couldn't read it all before it flipped.
ReplyDelete