I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Sonny, thanks for commenting on my blog! Thanks for saying it can't be improved any more. I enjoyed making it and I liked "the fun never ends" too! Anyways, thanks for commenting!
Hi Aryan my name is Antonette and I'm a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's school. I really liked the way how you made winter sound very fun. Next time maybe you could put in an eye catching title not just "Winter Acrostic Poem" maybe you could do it as "My Winter Wonderland" or something. I'm excited to see more work from you Aryan.
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Hi Aryan I really love your poem and I like when it says "the fun never ends"
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Hey Sonny, thanks for commenting on my blog!
DeleteThanks for saying it can't be improved any more.
I enjoyed making it and I liked "the fun never ends" too!
Anyways, thanks for commenting!
Well done! That poem makes winter sound rather pleasant. I'm interested to know what delicious food is. ;-)
ReplyDeleteHi Aryan my name is Antonette and I'm a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's school. I really liked the way how you made winter sound very fun. Next time maybe you could put in an eye catching title not just "Winter Acrostic Poem" maybe you could do it as "My Winter Wonderland" or something. I'm excited to see more work from you Aryan.
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