Show Don't Tell Narrative Opening
I have been tasked to write an show don't tell narrative opening bases on these following pictures.
As I watched the red beast grow larger and larger I felt the smoldering heat get closer and closer.
She turned her head, thinking this would be the last time she saw him. Little did she know this was only the beginning...
As we felt the green blades drag across our legs we could see the things bright red eyes through the dark fog, with only the bright light in my hands lighting the way.
She had a devilish look as she tried to conceal the sacred consumables...
It was as if he was just a ghost, floating away from his job to complete greater endeavors.
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